User: 50nic_t43_43dg340g
I'm not taking this seriously, this strip just sucks is all. -Posted on Mar 13, 2007

User: shaggsj8
your taking this way to seriously -Posted on Mar 12, 2007

User: 50nic_t43_43dg340g		2
Affraid it's been done, the frame outline and size of the frames need some work and many people have already done the whole shadow waking up thing not knowing what's going on "Omg I woke up I need to find the history behind me because I'm emo and am still in love with a dead thirteen year old girl that I killed but don't know it this is who I am!" and they've done it alot better, the chat bubbles need some work along with the tails of the bubbles. The water and clouds are in the same place the whole time... wtf? Clouds move and even at times when they don't, water should always be running. If you're new then be aware that this isn't to "bring down your self-esteem" or "me being mean" it's me giving you constructive criticism on how to improve this comic. -Posted on Mar 12, 2007