Page 02
VegaX on May 18, 2006
Page 02 continues with a brief run-threw of some of the other occupants of the hotel.
They have no real part of THIS tale but they might pop up in future stories. Or not.
As said before, i experiment a bit with this comic. Art wise and with color. Using rhymes isn't easy either but hopefully i manage to pull it of somewhat.
Product Placement at 9:16PM, April 25, 2010
I agree with the last couple of comments. The text seems to lack certain flow. I doesn't feel like a poem. Apart from that, I'm liking this so far.
anonymous at 3:49PM, March 11, 2008
SWEEET!!!! but the rhyming needs work sorry
TheMidge28 at 6:24PM, Aug. 13, 2007
the rhyming is a hit or miss I see...the art is very unique...I especially like the twins...
Fitz at 10:32AM, July 21, 2007
Loving it so far! The rhymes are great, the narration has a nice, talkative style, which I absolutely love. The artwork's really good, especially the colors,
Zenstrive at 3:06AM, April 8, 2007
well, well, well, nice rhyems
simonitro at 6:51AM, Sept. 15, 2006
What is even impressive is that when you scroll and read the passages, it gives a really nice atmposhpere!
Locoma at 10:49PM, June 16, 2006
yes, narrative skills he have indeed
Tamerlane at 8:32PM, May 19, 2006
i love this! great style and everything!
jxknight at 2:27PM, May 19, 2006
what a uniquely done coloring!
Glass_Ink at 2:15PM, May 19, 2006
Nice!! Very poetic... Gave it a Twilight Zone kind of feel.