I'm really happy with this page. Mostly because I'm getting into drawing these battley scenes. Also, because I love the Maya brothers. I can't wait to get to their story, but it will be a long time off..... You have...no idea what I'm talking about. It's ok though, don't mind me rambling on. *sings* "Lord, I was born a rambling man...."
Aaaaaaaanyway, to describe the page: In the top panel, there is fighting and some of the few remaining soldiers left standing are in a back to back circle trying to figure out their next move. Himura comes up with the brilliant idea of shooting the thing with a cannon, but they are under ice. Two offer to do the shooting, that would be Sen and Rin Maya. Petra and Nenki volunteer to make sure they don't get killed while trying to shoot the cannon. Himura turns to see what Katsumi is thinking of doing but....he's ditched the place! Nenki pauses in his story telling as he relives his trauma and Kage eggs him on.
This scene got me so confused.. I think i'm gonna have to reread the whole thing from the beginning.. I can't figure out who's good or evil, or dead or alive, or what anyone's names are..
An extra character bio section would be great, if you don't want to put all the info into your comments everytime, that is. But of course the best option would be to have all of these characters take the spotlight sometime, and make them shine so we'll never ever forget who they are. Which of course will mean many more decades of comic-making for you. That actually leads into an interview question :P
Abt Nihil: It is a bit confusing. There are a lot of characters, and I didn't really introduce them or anything. They are just there. It's starting to sound like I need to do some sort of character roster......
