FlameChocobo Bad Boy Mike! No more Ice Cream. This one Featured FlameChocobo the Fighter. WARNING!: contains Foul Language. -Posted on Sep 26, 2006
#5 - Bad White Mage! #4 - White Mage, Mike is a Pervert! #3 - Alia Gets Stripped and Caged #2 - Mike Assults Alia #1 - Girly Red Mage Prologue

User: Holyknight		5
hehehe, no icecream :P -Posted on Sep 26, 2006

User: Shade		2
Alrighty speechbubbles are fine and your using backgrounds that are not two tone and font is easy to read, well that's the good points done. Here's the bit your not going to like... the bad points. The writing your spelling may be right but your dialouge is dry and not very amusing. I have noticed no difference in your characters at all in terms of personality. Also it appears you have put little fore thought into your comic before starting it, that's a bad idea. My adivice stop and think before you update again have in mind a real plot and purpose to your comic, some character personality wouldn't go astray either. -Posted on Sep 26, 2006

User: Mordechai		5
LOL! -Posted on Sep 26, 2006