User: Rustychipmunk		5
i think her hand is on backwards in the last panel. -Posted on Nov 19, 2009

User: Greyman
Location? -Posted on May 19, 2009

User: LiirThorne
I'm currently working with a friend an updated new and improved version and more thought out version of this story. ~Liir -Posted on Apr 22, 2009

User: Greyman
Awe. No update in the longest time. -Posted on Mar 26, 2009

User: wiggbat		5
Lucynell huh? Awesome. She looks like a sprinkle-topped ice cream sundae with extra sparkles and fluffy unicorns.. or something.. I wouldn't say no to that ;D -Posted on May 07, 2008

User: Greyman		5
Very cute. Nice pencil shaded art too. -Posted on Mar 07, 2008

User: Poki_rat		5
Looks like it might be cute. -Posted on Feb 13, 2008