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| | User: webcomics heh | | 5 | | Lil dude is pretty stoked in that last panel. -Posted on Oct 13, 2009 | | User: Darkmax | | 5 | -Posted on Oct 30, 2006 | | User: LIZARD_B1TE | | 4 | Pretty good. I liked that picture of the king sitting in his room.
Oh, and while your offer is tempting, I think the cruddy paint art on my comic suits it pretty well, so, no. -Posted on Jul 24, 2006 | | User: DankmanZero | | | | Ruler is a good idea, because this comic is like a sad attempt at a clean nice looking comic, i promise the next few pages will look nicer!!! I be done it and more by monday!!! Thank for the bashing, my heart broke but it will be back. lol please dont feel bad im only kidding, kind of... -Posted on Jul 23, 2006 | | User: adriley | | 4 | | This is cute. :D The story progress is going nicely. You may want to use a ruler, but I usually don't bother with panel straightness. In some cases it adds to the style. :D -Posted on Jul 23, 2006 | | User: DankmanZero | | | | Ya, your right this is too good of a story to waste on shitty drawings. I start working on better pics from this point on, looking back on it it pisses me off to see Cladus's head shape different in each pic. -Posted on Jul 22, 2006 | | User: Rich | | | | Yeah, I think inking this would do wonders for the coherency. -Posted on Jul 22, 2006 | | User: thatreevesgirl | | | | your line work is a little choppy, but I can definitely see the story going in my head...if you don't have a computer program to clean it up have you thought about inking it by hand? You could definitely clean it up even without a computer. :D -Posted on Jul 22, 2006 | | User: Anonymous | | 3 |  I think the art could use a bit of work. It feels a bit choppy. I think that it would really help if you used a ruler to do your panels. -Posted on Jul 22, 2006 |
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