| | FOAMY89 | | I'll update when I update -Posted on Jan 27, 2006 | | User: Darkmax | | 5 | -Posted on Oct 31, 2006 | | User: evadragon04 | | | | yeah, are you ever going to update? -Posted on Aug 15, 2006 | | User: Emotional | | | | Stop lying randal, just wondering foamy... when do you plan to update? -Posted on Feb 16, 2006 | | User: Randal | | | | i too, am a lazy bastard. -Posted on Feb 16, 2006 | | User: kitty_su | | 5 | | I don't get it at all yet, but I like the teddy bear on page 1. Hee. -Posted on Feb 16, 2006 | | User: evadragon04 | | 5 | | Yeah, you are lazy. You should do another comic. Im only giving you a five cause I seen the other version of this comic you made and it was much better. -Posted on Feb 15, 2006 | | User: FOAMY89 | | | | Yes, I am a lazy b*stard. -Posted on Feb 15, 2006 | | User: FOAMY89 | | | | Thanks for the suggestions, I will use your advice to enhance the quality of my comic. -Posted on Feb 09, 2006 | | User: Eirikr | | 4 | Good way to start off. Looks very intersting and I'll be glad to see where it goes.
Also, sorry to agree with the critic (*cough*ashlees*cough*), but at first glance, the 2nd comic is a little visually confusing. In the end it comes together, but yeah, something more is needed to seperate the drawings.
Sorry to be longwinded and I hope you don't think I'm telling you what to do. Just a suggestion. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Emotional | | 5 | I have nothing to say cept thats they way I like it.
update when yah feel like it, I'll be reading. -Posted on Feb 05, 2006 | | User: AshleeS | | 3 | So far, a little rocky. What you need to do, first-off, is make panels - panels are essential! That way, dialouge and pictures aren't muddled. Bubbles are also a biggie.
I'm sorta' confused on what's happening, but I guess some comics start out like that, eh? -Posted on Jan 28, 2006 | | User: FOAMY89 | | | | Yes I know, just don't read this comic if this doesn't satisfy your entertainment needs towards web comics. -Posted on Jan 28, 2006 | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here! | | |