I had a free day yesterday, so I spent all day on this. I thought it would be another week before this came out. I really like how well the wet-tshirt worked ^_^.
-Posted on Apr 07, 2006
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your style is fantastic. not just your art, which is impressive and painterly... but the words are poetry, and the meandering form the words take on the page seems an art form itself. I can't wait to read the whole thing. Woo!
I'd like to welcome the people who googled "wet t-shirt" next time ill have to say "naked chicks" on my author's notes, maybe that will increase hits. hahaha
The colouring and such is very warm and awesome. Really puts you there.
I have a couple of probs with the anatomy (miss me? :p) inc no hips on that woman.. plus her facial features are quite large compared to the room for the skull. Also her lifted arm is shaded so that it looks as its been folded over funny.
i use a very cheap wacom. my $200 waccom broke down a year ago. now i have to use a small $99 one. which isn't as good because after 3 months the pen broke and i had to buy another one. the pressure sensitivity is so off, im surprised i can still do art with it.
I was trying to connect a lot of themes that reflect the page with the writting. "emerged, raise, upper" describing her coming out of the water. And the way I rhymed "epitome" and "creativity" is a creative way to say that she is beautiful. I'm glad people are able to pick up on the writting also.
I love the warm colors..and the painting itself. I really admire how you can create such unique characters too.
Do you use Intuos Wacom? because I use Graphire, and I was wondering if there's alot of difference betweeen the two when painting.
oh wow! I just read your comment box on the last page. I had no idea! I did enoy the comic while it lasted but this ones very lovly looking too. the detail in the faces and the wonderful colors. I'm hoping to see more. I'll have to add you to my box so I don't loose it. I'm glad I found it forgot how I did but I did. ^o^
**updated 4/10/06 fixed the faces for better expressions. Especially on the guy, who had a stoic expression. this time you can see more elasticity in his skin
confused- your pretty much where i was 3 years ago. but for me it was artists like Linda Bergkvist and other high caliber artist. I never really thought i would come halfway close to those types of works, but you just gotta keep going and learning. On that note i opened up a dd comic account where I share some of my digital tricks "Subcultured Tutorials".
I hope you're happy! It's people like you who make inferior artists like me eat their fingers!*goes off and cries at the sheer awesomeness of this page*.
You are truly an amazing artist. I love how the water turned out.
You only spent one day at this? That's amazing.
Oh, and wet t-shirts rule. If every chick were to wear a wet t-shirt, that would kick ass.
Wish I could rate higher than a 5.
whooaaa dude. You really show off your skills here sub. Very nice portrait work and the girl is hoOOoot. Sure thing, you pulled it really well of the "wet t-shirt looK" Awesome that it's your own design shirt :) Respect brother
If you're wondering where you saw her shirt. it's from "subcultured style" offer on my main page. It's been while since I've made shirt designs, so I though I could tie it into the comic.
I also updated my site. Better navigation and updated the links. There's a link to an archived "the rock". in the movies section, vote to get "echo dreams" into the serious shorts collection of newgrounds. It's a few more votes away from getting there.
Yes, indeed very nice... if realism is what you are aiming at, then the neck seems to be a bit long. Other than that, the picture is awesome, yes the wet t-shirt too.
oh man, what can i say that isnt obvious already; the style is awsome, your is shading superb and the human characteristcs at its best... specially boobies nice :3
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