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| User: LanceDanger | | 5 | | Whoa, I missed this page =0 Anywho, lookin' awesome! -Posted on Nov 09, 2009 | | User: Anonymous | | |  oh you made it work nicely, it just seemed to jump a little...could be the psychosis thats slowly affecting the kid though ;) -Posted on Nov 02, 2009 | | User: salasvexx | | | no, thats good! Anonymous.
I actualy did mess up the order but didnt notice till later. I feel I made it work, i guess. Good eye -Posted on Nov 02, 2009 | | User: Anonymous | | 5 | its very good, but it almost seems like some of the pics are out of order..like it should go 1, 3, 4, 2, 5, 6, 7
but maybe thats just me -Posted on Nov 01, 2009 | | User: Brogan | | 5 | -Posted on Oct 26, 2009 | | User: salasvexx | | | Thanks for the comments, you guys are Fantastic! And I know it's text book "Deal W Devil" but thats what I wanted. I'm just trying my own version.
Toughy- I knew it sounded weird when writting it. Normally, I wouldnt care, but I want Razzel to speak very properly, So I'll go back later & fix it. -Posted on Oct 21, 2009 | | User: TheTenthRay | | 5 | Morgan needs to watch more movies, this is the "deal with the devil" without the crossroad.
Cant wait to see how this turns out, keep'em coming :3 -Posted on Oct 21, 2009 | | User: Toughy | | | | "your brother's" should be "you are brothers" unless you forgot a word after the possessive to say something like no one even knows your brother's secret. -Posted on Oct 21, 2009 | | User: Janen | | 5 | | Poor Morgan, he sure is tempting. -Posted on Oct 21, 2009 | | User: Peipei | | 5 | | He's gotta learn to resist this guy x.x -Posted on Oct 21, 2009 | | User: plymayer | | 5 | -Posted on Oct 21, 2009 |
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