Your color and use of watercolor is beautiful and impressive - I've really enjoyed going through your archives! In fact, I noticed your comic when you updated because it popped up on the "just updated" part of the main page, and the colors drew me in. Really, truly, great ambiance. I'm having some difficulties with the story, though. It seems - jumpy? As though you have a massive story to tell, but have been skipping parts of it in your haste to get to something you've particularly been wanting to draw. Character motivation seems to change suddenly (for example, from "I don't need any help!" to "I need help all the time!"), some junctions seem quite random ("We will now go into this convenient cave and easily travel to exactly where we wanted to go!"), and changes in character caught me by surprise ("I remember nothing!" to "I know this moss guy and all along knew you were my descendent even though I know nothing about myself or this modern world!"). But lovely line work!
Mina_Lunga at 5:28PM, March 7, 2012
Your color and use of watercolor is beautiful and impressive - I've really enjoyed going through your archives! In fact, I noticed your comic when you updated because it popped up on the "just updated" part of the main page, and the colors drew me in. Really, truly, great ambiance. I'm having some difficulties with the story, though. It seems - jumpy? As though you have a massive story to tell, but have been skipping parts of it in your haste to get to something you've particularly been wanting to draw. Character motivation seems to change suddenly (for example, from "I don't need any help!" to "I need help all the time!"), some junctions seem quite random ("We will now go into this convenient cave and easily travel to exactly where we wanted to go!"), and changes in character caught me by surprise ("I remember nothing!" to "I know this moss guy and all along knew you were my descendent even though I know nothing about myself or this modern world!"). But lovely line work!
gurukitty at 9:10PM, March 5, 2012
shadow, same shadow in all 3 panels
Ozmandious at 5:52PM, March 5, 2012
Was that last panel a shadow, or something under the ground?