Im really pleased on this strip for one reason, his dads expression, but overall like Omega mention... Heri needs a little more roundness on him.
******WHO TO THANK!
-Harmorhage: thank's Ham,Im glad your sticking to this one aswell! really enjoying drawing this comic,some of the future bloody scene's, I can say were inspired by you...
-MOrgan: thanks for tunning in appreciated!
-Omega5ooo:Yeah i've spent a while looking at ref.pictures, but your right Heri's back should had been rounder, but i think he still looks good... dont worry ive taken it into consideration for future updates! thanks
Looking at refence pictures always helps, but the father's head already looks very realistic in the first panel. However, in the second panel the Cub should have a "longer, more round back".