Cresent Moon (CM Pg. 1)

Cresent Moon

This is my first major series!

Basicly this is a story about pirates. Oh ho ho!

I really hope you all like it.

I don't know when my updates will be, but I promise I won't let this die.

Please give me constructive critisim! I want to improve as much as I can. I also warn you, I'm still not very good at panel setup. D:
Tips would be nice.

Also, character designs have a tendency to change from page to page due to experimentation. (Poor Salem. :/)

Character appearences:

Boy with blue hair and green eyes:
That is Salem. (Last name n/a yet.) He is Kenji's first mate. I want him to be around...I dunno, 15 or 16 years old. He's kinda short.

Man with purple hair:
Kenji. He's the captain. I want him to be "bipolar" I guess. He has MASSIVE mood swings. Happy once minute, raging mad the next. Loveable, though. Woo. When I color these pages traditionaly, I like Kenji's hair a lot better. :/ I use so many different shades of purple and blue...I just can't really get that on photoshop. So I just default to a dark purple color.

Anyways...enjoy.

I'll try and update every other saturday. Maybe sooner. Depends on when I get the pages colored. D:

Tell me if you think the page's size is to big. If it is, I'll try to shrink it.

:]

-Mandy

-Posted on Oct 26, 2008

User: lain 5

i looked at this and the first thing that popped in my mind was "BIG AWSOME CRAZY HAIR" xD after i read this i was "is this left to right? right to left?"
-Posted on Feb 13, 2009

User: EnviousEnvy101 5

It seems interesting so far!
I like Kenji already! ^_^
I like the style, but maybe up the font so it's easier to read? ^_^;;
-Posted on Nov 30, 2008

User: Razzl3erry

:]
Thanks!

I guess. I don't like to start comics like that. I try to set it up so everyonce gets their name in, ya know?
-Posted on Oct 26, 2008

User: honey bucket 4

Looks cute. I like the third panel a lot.
It's a weird way to start it though. Like, no....introductory/set up page. I dunno, maybe it's just me.
-Posted on Oct 26, 2008

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