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| Flup | Originally the last panel wasn't there but I added it afterwards.
Two random facts:
- All the characters' eye colours have reasons behind them.
- One of WD's eyes is always slightly lopsided. (Usually the right.)
As you can see, Zanzy is more likely to panic in a frightening situation, while WD would usually stay calm. No prizes for anyone who guesses who the "Knight" is :) -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 |
| | User: Flup | | | No blatant suspense? Hooray!
Things like "OH NOES!" followed by the end of a page really annoy me, so that's good news.
Thanks for saying that :) -Posted on Oct 09, 2008 | | User: Pinao212 | | 5 | | I was just looking back at your first pages and remembered when you first started the comic. I've gotta say your setup and timing of events is much better than it used to be. The suspense, for instance, is still there from strip to strip, but it's not really blatant anymore. I've gotta say you've done a fantastic job! -Posted on Oct 08, 2008 | | User: Flup | | | solaris knight: She's happy because she's getting her way.
rain storm: Thankyou, although in my opinion the characters looked a bit flat here.
mmm bacon0: She is going to break something, actually x[
antcomics: Thanks for reading.
Sara: Maybe I should put a krzzzzz or ZZZZzzhhhhew sound effect in?
croxtonhas: Seems that adding that last panel was a good idea :) -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: croxtonhas | | 5 | | great page, I'd fav it again, if I could! -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: Chameleon Kid | | 5 | | Pretty blue! (It needs a nice ZZZZzzhhhhew sounds effect.) ...Then again, that sort of sound can't be spelled out very well... *dang, I love sound effects* ^,^ -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: mmm bacon0 | | 5 | | Hope Saradomin doesn't break something being that hyper, lol -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: rain storm | | 5 | OMG calm down Saradomin, you're supposed to be the more sensible one o_o
Great colouring! I love the third panel -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: solaris knight | | 5 | i agree with japlander, your colour in these pages is amazing.
i think saradomin has had a little too much sugar... -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: Flup | | | | As long as you understand what's going on, I'm happy :) -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 | | User: n_y_japlander | | 5 | | (OO) Wow Flup... your coloring has come a long long way!!! These pages kick all sort of arse!!! -Posted on Oct 07, 2008 |
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