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JoeL_CQB on May 31, 2010
I'm starting to hate my narrating, and thinking about scrapping this story-line instead of trying to recycle it.
Biggest problem that I'll run into is that I'll read chapter 1, think to myself if it gets me engaged, and if it doesn't than, I should scrap the story all together. I'm constantly trying to put too many things together, and it doesn't seem to pull off right...
anyways, i'll still finish this chapter, and have it end there.
also, feedback?
Rickswan at 3:58AM, Jan. 1, 2011
bet blondie there feels like a monkey's uncle
TheStarsAbove at 1:47PM, July 3, 2010
looks good, it has very good art, so I look forawrd to seeing more of a story established
Blue_and_Aze at 4:01PM, June 1, 2010
its hard to judge now since the main story line hasn't really been revealed to us yet, but i'd say stick with it for now! these things have a way of pulling together in the end
JoeL_CQB at 9:47AM, June 1, 2010
Thanks for the input and support. I guess I'll finish this chapter; see how things turn out then decide on what to do. @Doc Shadow: If I were to scrap the story, I would keep the same setting. I was looking back, and I didn't like how the intro introduced what is going on. There were also some minor character re-designs that I did some time ago, figured out how I wanted to weave that in, but at the same time I really wanted to have the redesigns show up 'now.' @Tharisfal: I actually thought about modifying the storyline a little bit, but after thinking about executing it, it seems like that would be a lot more work than just scrapping it and starting it from a new.
Tharisfal at 4:09AM, June 1, 2010
I love the art and I'm okay with the storyline. The way I see it you'll get better while practicing, scraping it now would seem a bit counter-productive. You could modify it without scraping it, or completely rewrite the storyline within the restrictions created by the 19 pages you've drawn so far.
Doctor Shadow at 2:09AM, June 1, 2010
If you've got too many threads to consider, you might want to pick one that engages you the most as the creator, one that the readers seem to want to follow and take your story in that direction. I think it would be a shame if you scrapped this whole thing since you've put so much work into it already and you've got some good art to back it up. If you're still going to scrap it, perhaps a different story in the same setting? Whatever you decide I'll be around till the end.
leeuwen12 at 1:23AM, June 1, 2010
Don't have such a low profile of yourself...it is often that people don't understand a story of what's going on but if all pieces fit together in the end no one cares, just make sure you do and keep on the good drawing so people read till the end ;)