| | User: Aura Wolf | | | | any time soon? -Posted on Sep 19, 2007 | | User: Bullet th | | | | Ok, first of all, the first panel, Bullet's new body, something that will be explained later...panel 2-Bullet's signature move Bullet Speed allows him to slow down time and run at high speeds to get around much faster, then it cuts to a scen with the other three...not Bullet looking at them... -Posted on Jul 17, 2007 | | User: Aura Wolf | | 5 | Nice comic, but I think it might be better if you slow down the pace of the comic. It seems to be that Bullet is in a machine for some random reason, then all of a sudden he's running, then it entirely skips him to look at Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles. Trust me on this one; slow down the comic and focus on mainly one person or event per page.
Otherwise, I like where this is going, so I'll keep my eye on it. -Posted on Jul 17, 2007 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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