D'you think you can take the time to go over it and edit it? I don't mean it in a bad way, but excessive mispelling completely unnerves me. I mean, one or two mispellings is okay, but four on a page is an awful lot...
I, personaly, stay away from screen tones...they just don't work with my style...however, it looks good so far with yours. One suggestion; on close ups like the two here use another darker screen tone for the darkest parts (inner ear, etc) It'll give the page more depth ^-^