BlitzBoy

Hey guys, this is my first sprite comic i've ever created, i hope you all like it,it took me quite a time to do. -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

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User: Anonymous		2
-Posted on Dec 06, 2006

User: BlitzBoy
Thanks Magnus, i appreciate your suggestions, i to hope i can achieve my full pontential. :) -Posted on Nov 28, 2006

User: magnus911
I PQ'd you suggestions. You have potential, all you have to do is brush up on the quality, and you might draw in up to 100 readers daily. -Posted on Nov 27, 2006

User: BlitzBoy
Now i need a hug >.< Sorry guys, its my first one and i don't know about altering sprites and all that. From more advanced comic makers such as yourselves, do you think i should learnmore about editing chracters and remake this comic? -Posted on Nov 27, 2006

User: Mega Josh		3
BlitzBoy Said: I rate my own page a 2 aswell. 0_0 You can't actually rate yourself. The comic itself could be better. The bottom credit thing is something you don't need to do. If there are tails connected to the word bubbles and they're pointing to who's talking, you don't need to put who's talking in front of the speech and the grammar could be improved. -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

User: magnus911		3
It's okay, but I don't like the fact that you made Lloyd and Presea into Densuke and Genesis without altering their sprites at all. People might think that Lloyd and Presea are traveling with Blitz instead of Densuke and Genesis. Punctuation could be improved. -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

User: soonmme
@blitz: yes, when I saw the tittle I thaught this was drawn, sorry I meant to rate a 3 :p -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

User: BlitzBoy
I rate my own page a 2 aswell. 0_0 -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

User: BlitzBoy
Note: Updating tommorow. -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

User: BlitzBoy
K i did. But before i go, wasen't it a bit obvious that it is a sprite comic? Im using sprites..... -Posted on Nov 26, 2006

User: soonmme		2
This is a sprite comic. label it as so. -Posted on Nov 26, 2006