What not to do
Jety Lefr on March 11, 2011
hmmmm... what do you think? I'm trying to do more of the narrative stuff with examples. I like those. Those and the "ideas of humor" are my favorites.
Bean Dip
Jety Lefr on March 11, 2011
hmmmm... what do you think? I'm trying to do more of the narrative stuff with examples. I like those. Those and the "ideas of humor" are my favorites.
Jety Lefr at 6:45AM, March 13, 2011
i know. any suggestions to improve it?
the1truesushiboy at 8:36PM, March 12, 2011
Not your best. The punchline could be better.