| | trevoramueller | I toyed with the joke for this comic, and went through like 4 punchlines before finally landing on this one - which I think is most humorous of the bunch.
The original punchline didn't have the woman speak, but then when I started playing with ideas of what she could say (and ultimately, how Trevor would react) the joke came into its own. I had variations of sexual innuendo, like her saying, "I want to have sex with you, Trevor," and Trevor saying, "Is that the steak talking...?"
They just didn't work as well as this one, though. This is what I get for having an idea in my head and not scripting it in advance....
I'm going back to Ann Arbor this weekend to help a friend move into a new apartment, and hopefully taking a boat-load of pictures for a funny story arc. I don't want to spoil anything in case it doesn't happen, but if it does happen it'll be good. You'll laugh.
Have a great weekend! -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 |
| User: trevoramueller | | | kyupol: I think I'm just so hungry that I'm hallucinating. But there could be a fetish in there somewhere. I mean, everyone enjoys some whipped cream....
croxtonhas: Ah yes...and what would we do instead of dinner....? ;) I'm totally going to turn into the internet equivalent of the pie @#$%er. -Posted on Oct 07, 2009 | | User: kyupol | | 5 | | you have a vore fetish (anything to do with eating is sexy) or somethin? -Posted on Jul 10, 2009 | | User: croxtonhas | | 5 | | Let's skip dinner! -Posted on Jun 24, 2009 | | User: trevoramueller | | | Druchii: Oh, Whitesnake...damn, you're a romantic, sir! :P
blntmaker: I suppose it would depend on the age of the kids. If you go too young, then it could also work as a deterrent.
seventy2: I think leaving the last panel blank would have been a little more ambiguous, but certainly not bad. An empty plate also would have worked....
ttyler: That shot's of some girl off the internet. Usually I like to use people I know, but didn't feel right about asking one of my model friends if I could use one of her photos in a food fantasy comic. :P
Steely Gaze: Yeah, the other ending was a little too overtly sexual. This is more focused on the hallucination than the sex. And also, steak is great - we should have steak (and steak women) every day! -Posted on Jun 23, 2009 | | User: Steely Gaze | | 5 | I think this was the better joke to go with. It has plenty of sexual innuendo without being overly crass. Plus, it's funny. :)
And your expressions fit the pace of the comic quite well, beginning with almost euphorically happy, and ending with nearly completely hypnotized. And let's be fair: what heterosexual man would not be utterly captivated by a talking steak woman?
Speaking of which, I have this strange craving for steak right now.... -Posted on Jun 22, 2009 | | User: ttyler | | 5 | | WHo is that woman...errr....steak. i mean, what is the name of that choice cut of buff....errrr....beef!!! Man, those pea pods look pretty packed in there....... -Posted on Jun 20, 2009 | | User: seventy2 | | 5 | i think you could have left the last panel blank, and had the same effect. affect? eeee fect. aaaaah fect. affection.
sorry i digressssssssssss -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: blntmaker | | 5 | | Oh that was priceless - Here's a new way for kids to look at broccoli! -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: Druchii | | 5 | | LMAOOO!!! Oh yeah, this is too true! Except there's a lot more smoke and lights in my version. And probably some Whitesnake playing in the background. LOL! :D -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: trevoramueller | | | | khard12: But the food still looks delicious when I'm drunk...just a different kind of delicious! -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: khard12 | | 5 | | I'm not sure if that was the steak talking or the (insert adult beverage of choice here). You're supposed to stop drinking BEFORE your food starts talking to you. -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: trevoramueller | | | | Walrus: I want steak CONSTANTLY! ;) -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: trevoramueller | | | Brogan: Thanks, glad you dug it.
harryq: Thanks for reading!
amanda: I don't know that I would call it a problem, personally.... -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: Walrus | | 5 | | All of a sudden I want some steak. -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: amanda | | 5 | | See? See?! Now THIS is why I'm a vegetarian. I'm forever being propositioned by half-nekkid steak women. It's kind of a problem. -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: harryq | | 5 | -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | | User: Brogan | | 5 | | HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was hilarious! -Posted on Jun 19, 2009 | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here! | |
