| Luminous | Page 72. Nothing much to say about this page, really.
Page 29 has been changed a little. I decided to alter the dialogue a little to show that the attacking ship was not trying to hurt anyone, just disable the engines. Nothing story-changing, just revealing a little bit more than on the original page. Perhaps this adds a bit more interest ^^. -Posted on Jul 03, 2009 |
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| User: BlkKnight | | 5 | | Liking the coloring so far. -Posted on Jul 04, 2009 | | User: usedbooks | | 5 | | I agree with warped. I love the way you did the water. -Posted on Jul 03, 2009 | | User: Warpedwenger | | 5 | | The water looks cool. -Posted on Jul 03, 2009 | | User: Ashveira | | 5 | | Sadie's so calm... lovely page :) -Posted on Jul 03, 2009 |
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It was a normal day on a normal planet for Sadie - until a rogue
vortex opened up under her feet and she ended up on a strange planet in
a strange dimension. Alone, confused, and unable to remember anything,
she meets up with Marlow, the pilot of the spaceship Angelfish, and
Aster, the computer technician, and joins them in their travels in the
hope finding her home one day.
Chapter One - Cosmos
Chapter Two - The Letter
Chapter Three - Magic
Original Launch Date: April 28, 2006
Relaunch Date: December 14, 2007
Update Schedule: Fridays
The Rift
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