| Luminous | Tuesday is most definitely not Friday, but here, have page 73 anyway. :] Also, I can't draw running poses. Oh well.
Not sure if I like the coloring on this page. Critiques appreciated here ^^. -Posted on Jul 21, 2009 |
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| User: Freakeh | | 5 | | Hi hi, long time no see! I hope you're still around :3 The colouring looks great! I really like the second panel, Maeran's hair is drawn so well. I seem to remember a different cover for Chapter Three before -- where did it go? Though this one looks great too, I wish I could draw profiles that well. Hope you're doing okay! Speak to you soon I hope! ^_^ -Posted on Oct 18, 2009 | | User: BlkKnight | | 5 | | Coloring looks fine to me. -Posted on Jul 22, 2009 | | User: ghostrunner | | 5 | | the coloring works ;) -Posted on Jul 21, 2009 | | User: rokulily | | 5 | | ah, the ol' confuse and run. I love doing that. -Posted on Jul 21, 2009 | | User: Darius Drake | | 5 | | I wonder if that mark is new or old, as well as what it's purpose is. Oh well, I should know fairly soon (paying attention only to comic pages, not actual time). -Posted on Jul 21, 2009 | | User: Ashveira | | 5 | | run while you can... -Posted on Jul 21, 2009 | | User: usedbooks | | 5 | I get that feeling on my neck too...
I think the coloring looks okay. I'm not sure about the highlights. It's hard to tell in what direction the light source is. I do that with my lighting sometimes too. I like the way you did the hair. It gives it some texture, but it looks a little flat. A highlight on the crown and shading around the face can help that. -Posted on Jul 21, 2009 |
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It was a normal day on a normal planet for Sadie - until a rogue
vortex opened up under her feet and she ended up on a strange planet in
a strange dimension. Alone, confused, and unable to remember anything,
she meets up with Marlow, the pilot of the spaceship Angelfish, and
Aster, the computer technician, and joins them in their travels in the
hope finding her home one day.
Chapter One - Cosmos
Chapter Two - The Letter
Chapter Three - Magic
Original Launch Date: April 28, 2006
Relaunch Date: December 14, 2007
Update Schedule: Fridays
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