kaori_nakano -Posted on Jun 19, 2006
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User: Farah		4
Cute characters. ;) -Posted on Jan 23, 2009

User: Darkmax		5
-Posted on Oct 30, 2006

User: Chibimaster_Kirsten
You might want to resize the pages, they're too big. The storyline looks good so far. Your art is okay, but could use some work. Try reading some "How to Draw manga/Anime" tutorials on the internet, they can help you a lot. -Posted on Jun 21, 2006