August 17th edit. This got pushed aside on my to-do list for a very good, very cool reason. :) I will have info LATER.
Okay, this page took me FOREVER to do. I tried really hard to make it look good. I think that they can look even better.
The problem with that is that there is no way that I can do pages that look like this with 2 full time jobs (both of which I work overtime for right now...but at least I can draw and stuff at both jobs)
I think that I want to keep producing better pages, so I will be cutting down the updates. Maybe in September I'll be able to handle going back up to three. I hope you all understand.
Also, if you don't know what YIFFING is, don't ask. I know but I really don't want to know. I had a friend...well, an acquaintance that was a furry. She told me that she was really a unicorn on the inside. I have had really bad experiences with unicorns in my life (50 year old men cosplaying as unicorns, Lydia WAS a unicorn apparently)...I can never look at them normally again (well, if they really existed that is)
I have also decided that I will continue the sketches that look cool, but they will be the voting incentive image. So if you want to see a pic, then you have to vote (today's is just the sketch that I had yesterday, but from now on I'll have new cool images for you to look at that are all rainbowatized). :) My personalized image of Nikaya is the vote link to thewebcomicslist...please vote on both if you like the comic, I'd really appreciate it.
To enter the plushie contest just go to the very first page and start commenting...there are only 8 pages so far to do so on...its not that hard. I'll even give you the link if your brain is too impaired to find the first strip. CLICK HERE TO BEGIN COMIC
This one, I see lots of progress. The art is better than the initial illustrations, and the panelling got better too, feels like a comic now, rather than illustrations pasted together.
WOAH THIS IS A HUGE IMPROVEMENT FROM THE FIRST 3 PAGES. WOW IS ALL i CAN SAY. THE COLOR THE SHADING THE HIGHLIGHTS EVERYTHING IS SO GOOD. AND THE CHARACTERS LOOK MORE REALISITIC. ^_^ THE CHIBI IS ADORABLE AS WELL. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE
There is a definite explanation to why she is talking like she's in another world with elements of our own...but its a secret...all will be revealed in time.
I have to admit, while funny, the gags were a bit jarring. Are you aiming for the inane in this comic, where it's okay to reference our world while in another? That's fine, it just wasn't expected, and I'll be interested to see where you take it from here. This reminds me a bit of White Hydra in that aspect.
The art, however, is spectacular. I love her pose in the last panel.
Oh, and I think one reason why Mange-like comics are distasted is due in part to the fact that most artists don't take the time to put their own style into the art form. They replicate an exact style from another well know author and add little to nothing to it.
Le Farce is a bit Mangaish, what with the eyes, expressions, speed lines, etc. But I add in my own art style as opposed to replicating an exact source. In turn, Le Farce has never really been compaired to Manga by anyone I know of except for me.
Hmm.. thought I already commented on this page.
Well I just wanted to say this looks great so far, and this page especially looks good, but I understand if you can't keep it up. Its the same with me. I'll probably get so lazy soon my characters were turn into traditional manga. :P
Anyway, cute lil lizard, and the cannibal thing made me laugh. Well, all the stores made me laugh. I don't know what yiffing is, and I don't want to, but thats a cute bear too XD
Yanagi-sen: In the top left panel, I really like how it looks, except that her shoulders seem a little too narrow for the size of her head and neck. The little chibi panel is adorable. In the bottom right, her hips seem a bit twisted. If you intended to catch her in the act of turning, you have it, if she is supposed to be resting against the wall, she looks torqued. I like the panel layout though.
I think you did a great job in this page. I would have liked to see her walk into the town but that is up to you. Will we see more of the guy in the bear costume?
Well, uh, Panther, what I mean is; her shoulders are in one position, which matches her body, but the neck looks like it's been twisted sideways. The head is in correct position for the neck, but the neck is slightly off from the shoulders and body. It's not that bad, or noticable. ^^;
And oddly enough, I knew some chick in high school who thought she was a unicorn whose horn broke off. She claimed that she transformed into one at night...
If you all come back and vote the next couple of days, I will be having oldschool pics of After from last November before the Duck crashed. The duck crashing made me push it back and put it off...so it looks very different today. I'll leave the first pic up through Wednesday. Putting it up tomorrow, so come back!
And the comment about Charlie's speech balloons will be implemented, that was a great idea!
Be careful with the word placement on top of the signs. They look a bit too much like they were just pasted over the art, instead of being a part of it. I would suggest doing some things to it to make it look more like it was drawn, such as adding a stroke around the text or shading it manually.
WHAT the....All of that didn't get posted?I swear, I had a review in there. v.v
Anyway, I SAID: I know what Furries are. I also know what Yiffing is. That's information I wish I didn't have. v.v
The artwork is improving, but in that last panel, the pose is a little unusual. Everything's fine, except that the head position and the shoulder position is disjointed. I don't know too many people who can bend their necks like that. Overall, though, the page is good.
I'm sorry to hear about your wallet, I hope that turns up soon.
Wow... That sounds like an aboslutely terrifying place. This page looks really nice. There's something about it that looks odd, though, but I'm not quite sure what...
Yanagi-sen: In the top left panel, I really like how it looks, except that her shoulders seem a little too narrow for the size of her head and neck. The little chibi panel is adorable. In the bottom right, her hips seem a bit twisted. If you intended to catch her in the act of turning, you have it, if she is supposed to be resting against the wall, she looks torqued. I like the panel layout though.
