| | User: Megadudex1 | | 5 | | Yeah, just make them panels -Posted on Dec 04, 2006 | | User: theleast | | | Has potential, though it's hard not to feel that this has been done before (have you read "Concerned"?). I have two suggestions:
1. Reduce the filesize, the images are taking way too long to load, even on DSL. Increase the level of JPG compression so we don't have to wait as long for the next page.
2. Most pages seem to be just individual bridging panels, very little happens. I strongly recommend either making each page more substantial in terms of content, or going with a more traditional style of laying out several panels on a single page - as it is, there's very little motivation for people to keep reading when it takes so many clicks forward before anything happens. -Posted on Dec 04, 2006 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here! |